Talk:HMS Gallant (H59)

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Thurgate in topic GA Review
Good articleHMS Gallant (H59) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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February 22, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 25, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the British destroyer HMS Gallant (pictured) struck a mine on 10 January 1941 that blew the bow off the ship, and had to be towed stern-first to Malta by the destroyer HMS Mohawk?

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 00:43, 22 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    prose:   (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
     
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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  5. It is stable.
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  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
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1. complement was 137 officers and men in peacetime. Might be worth noting the additional men in wartime.

  • Done.

2. Exclusive of government-furnished equipment like the armament. Do you mean Excluding?

  • Done.

3. her sister Griffin. Suggest - her sister-ship Griffin

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 00:43, 22 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Nice Work, Passed. Thurgate (talk) 14:40, 22 February 2011 (UTC)Reply