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- This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Greyhound (H05)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- prose:
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- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
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Comments
edit1. Exclusive of government-furnished equipment. Suggest - Excluding government-furnished equipment
- As always.
2. Aside from a brief period assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla. Suggest - Aside from a brief period were she was assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla
- Good idea.
3. withdrawal of the three survivors later that day. Are those the British destroyers that survived?
- Reworded.
4. 28/29 March. Suggest - 28-29 March
- Nope, this is the proper usage according to the MOS for the night of.
5. Stukas. Suggest - A link, or German Junkers Ju 87 dive bombers
- Did the same thing as for the other article.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:37, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
Nice work Strum. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 00:29, 2 March 2011 (UTC)