 | HMS Menace (1915) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 26, 2024. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Menace (1915)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- Image appropriately licensed
- Link launched in the lede
- Added link.
- but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
- Moved.
- It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
- Amended.
- What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
- Clarified.
- Add the sale date to the infobox
- Added.
- comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Clarified.
@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)