Talk:HMS Morris/GA1

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 17:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

• "Morris was one of the initial six Admiralty M-class destroyers ordered by the British Admiralty in May 1915 as part of the 1913–14 Naval Programme, one of the last destroyers to be ordered before the outbreak of the First World War" - is "one of the last" intended to refer to the class as a whole, or to Morris, or to both?

  I was intending Morris and have clarified that.

• Infobox - indicate that the length is length overall

  Done.

• Link aft at first usage, as it is a bit of a technical term

  Done.

• "Two German armed trawlers were sunk in the action" - by Morris, Vindex, or the planes?

  The source is not clear, so have changed the emphasis of the sentence.

• "The destroyer was transferred from the Harwich Force, along with Morris," - no need for the circular link on Morris

  Removed.

• End of service seems to be given as 31 November 1921 in the infobox, but as 8 November 1921 in the prose?

  Well noticed. The 31 is a repeat from the completion date.

• Campbell 1998 is listed as a source but doesn't seem to be used?

  Good spot. That was legacy so has been removed.

• Sources look reliable enough and image licensing is fine

  Thank you.

Good work here, placing on hold. Hog Farm _Talk 18:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

@Hog Farm: Thank you. I have made the amendments. simongraham (talk) 10:57, 19 January 2022 (UTC)