Talk:HMS Saladin (1919)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 16:06, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:06, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
Prelim
edit- V and W-class destroyer is a duplicated link
- Removed.
- Image correctly licensed
- Article is stable
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox
edit- "he S class was"
- Fixed.
- Very nit-picky, but the article says the ship was "handed over" which doesn't necessarily mean sold
- Amended.
Design and development
edit- "Mark V 21-inch torpedo to be carried aft"
- The source does not say. The implication is that they were carried in the torpedo tubes aft and that is carried over here.
Construction and career
edit- Choose whether you capitalise "Armistice" or not, currently you use both
- Capitalised as per MOS:MILTERMS
- "independent operator under HMS Victory" what does this mean, considering Victory doesn't really...go anywhere?
- The elderly ship of the line had been refloated by then and much the restoration carried out but was by no means operational. I have added some text to clarify that.
- "would be sent to join"
- Amended.
- What role did Saladin have in the sinking of U-207?
- I read the sources to say that the destroyer was one of the escorts that between them sank the submarine but the crew's actual contribution was probably small.
- Believe it should be "ON 18", etc, rather than "ON. 18" "ON.25", "HX. 154"
- Amended and linked.
- Perhaps a few more words on where these convoys are going, because it isn't made clear
- Clarified.
- Link Falmouth
- Added.
References
edit- References look good. AGF for print sources.
@Simongraham: Hi, that's all I have for now. Will await your responses. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 11:55, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: Thank you for looking at this. I believe all the changes have been made. simongraham (talk) 13:38, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Simongraham: Passing this article as satisfying the GA criteria. Your article output is almost unmatched! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:10, 30 September 2023 (UTC)