Talk:HMS Savage (G20)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Simongraham in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:57, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • "town of Burton on Trent" Burton-on-Trent or Burton upon Trent.
Done.
  • Is there a link for "adopted"?
Unfortunately not.
  • "new 4.5 inches" should be adj=on
Done.
  • " the QF Mk III forward and two single QF Mk IV " these two link to the same article.
Duplicate removed.
  • "Operations Camera and Operation Governor" links?
Unfortunately not. I have replaced this with a bit more context.
  • "from Gibraltar to Scapa Flow" links?
Done.
  • "the Battle of North Cape" _the_ North Cape.
Done.
  • "purchased in the Flotilla and" not the full formal name so just "flotilla" suffices.
Done.
  • "615 tons of oil" avoid starting sentences with nuermals.
Reworded.
  • "new 4.5 inches (114 mm" see above.
Done.
  • "twin QF Mk III mounted forward and two single QF Mk IV mounted" likewise.
Done.
  • "Hazemeyer mounts" what are they? Link?
Added link.
  • "Newcastle upon Tyne on " comma after Tyne.
Done.
  • "town of Burton on Trent" see above.
Done.
  • Operation Camera/Governor links?
Unfortunately not.
  • Link Gibraltar and Scarpa Flow.
Done.
  • Wartime service table could use a caption and row/col scopes per MOS:DTT for screen readers etc.
Done.
  • "Battle of North Cape" section and links, its "Battle of the North Cape".
Done.
  • "December the Admiralty signalled" overlinked.
Removed.
  • "cruisers HMS Belfast and" linked to a redirect.
Fixed.
  • "radar directed" hyphenate.
Done.
  • "star shells" what are they?
Added wikilink.
  • Link Portsmouth/Chatham, I imagine you are referring to the docks there, rather than the towns.
Yes. Added wikilinks
  • "Tirpitz, 1942-1944" en-dash.
Done.
  • "Disarmament, 1942-1947" en-dash.
Done.

That's all for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:20, 3 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for a comprehensive review. I have made amendments. Please take another look. simongraham (talk) 20:30, 3 September 2021 (UTC)Reply