Talk:Han Yu (pool player)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 03:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)Reply


Quick failing on length. Though GA has no length requirement, I do believe that this article is simply too short and fails criteria 3a with only 358 words of prose. The § career section consists almost entirely of her entering a tournament and who her final competitor(s) were, and the lack of other sections outside of this leaves a lot to be desired. The only except to this (and borderline at that) is the paragraph on the WPA Women's World Nine-ball Championship. Definitely because she is Chinese I know local media on her will be limited and difficult to access, but the article in its current state simply lacks too much, such as perhaps elaborating on her education and training if there are sources for it at all.  LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 03:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

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