Talk:Hanomag

Latest comment: 14 years ago by BulldozerD11 in topic Financial data - (PR / Copy vio ?)

Financial data - (PR / Copy vio ?)

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This section on Financial data does not make sense :- " During the last fiscal year, the number of machines produced increased from 2500 to 3900. In the previous fiscal year, the turnover amounted to 356 million Euros, 62% over the year before. Komatsu Hanomag hired around 300 new employees during the last year; counting 268 temporary employees, around 1170 people were employed at Komatsu Hanomag at the end of last fiscal year. This is twice as many as at the end of the business year 2005, when around 650 people were employed here. "


This A) reads as if lifted from a company report (not cited) - probably Copyvio with bits like "last fiscal year" and B) It is unclear as to periods referred to as no clear base date given, other than the twice as ........year 2005 bit thus its several years old now.

So if some one wants to make sense of it so it has structure and references to be of encyclopedic value and not an abstract addition (corporate PR ?) feel free to add it back after sourcing and rewriting it.


- BulldozerD11 (talk) 01:27, 8 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

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i suggest to move the colour photos into a picture gallery. the way the photos are positioned now they clutter the right hand side of even big screens. M@ximili@n 21:42, 5 May 2011 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Maximilian Schönherr (talkcontribs)