Talk:Helmut Wick/GA2

Latest comment: 5 years ago by K.e.coffman

GA Reassessment

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The article fails criterion #2b "all in-line citations are from reliable sources". The article is largely based on a work by an amateur historian (Ringlstetter, Herbert (2005). Helmut Wick, An Illustrated Biography of the Luftwaffe Ace and Commander of Jagdgeschwader 2 During the Battle of Britain. Atglen, PA: Schiffer Publishing. ISBN 978-0-7643-2217-4. {{cite book}}: Invalid |ref=harv (help)), the contents of which can be traced to war-time propaganda; please see:

Given the questionable source, the article also fails criterion #4 as being non-neutral. --K.e.coffman (talk) 17:55, 19 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

It's also A-class, I see. ——SerialNumber54129 19:31, 19 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
The updated link to the original A-class review is: Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Helmut Wick/archive1. K.e.coffman (talk) 04:34, 27 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Notwithstanding the possible issues concerning the sourcing, parts of the prose reflect common errors when translating from German to English, leading to the suppositions that some of the text - attributed for example to the NYT (paywall) was in fact from a German language original (Ringlstetter?). Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 21:34, 19 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Delist. I am convinced by K.e.coffman's reasoning above that Ringsletter was likely based off of Nazi propaganda. The main question is whether there are better sources, or if there are simply no high-quality, in-depth sources about this person and therefore it's not possible to write a GA on him. buidhe 12:50, 20 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Delist. Further to my comment above, I have now thoroughly examined the more detailed de.Wiki article: Ringlstetter states that his publication is based largely on a photo album and two diaries by Franz Fiby, a fighter pilot who flew joint missions with Wick. This diary had already been used by Nazi propaganda writers. Wick himself did not have a diary at the time. Battle descriptions, which are in the Grabler's 1943 publication as quotations from Wicks diary are identified, can be found in Ringlstetter as unspecified verbal descriptions of Wick or as Wicks told a war correspondent. It is safe to assume therefore, that Ringlstetter is not a reliable source. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:40, 20 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Delist per above. This certainly should have been caught by the GA reviewer, and the fact that it then sailed through A-class is slightly—worrying. ——SerialNumber54129 15:10, 20 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Comment Everything ever written is "biased" based on the circumstances and culture of the writer. "Propaganda" and "bias" accusations are modern terms. How about adding the above comments and references to the article, rather than putting this in the discussion?
What did Helmut Wick do during his lifetime? is the question to address here -- within the context of when and where he lived and who wrote about him -- and when he was written about. This discussion includes a lot of information throwing light on when he has written about and probable biases. Why not simply add this to the article? Outlier59 (talk) 03:13, 21 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Biased sources can be reliable or unreliable; Ringlstetter is the latter. Criterion #2b says: "all in-line citations are from reliable sources". K.e.coffman (talk) 18:40, 21 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
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