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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Henry Janzen/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• added kick returner and DB cats
• do you see any good images of his playing career besides the cards?
• add CFL to lead perhaps
• add height and weight
• infobox says cfl all star but that was West all star per statscrew and 1965 CFL season
• add 3× to infobox by grey cup
• add high school to infobox
• "In 1960" That is linked and so are some other years but I don't think we usually do that.
• "over the Hamilton Tiger-Cats" remove hamilton
• "The Winnipeg Blue Bombers made" remove winnipeg
• "and scored three touchdowns, a career-high" change to "a career-high three touchdowns"
• add vanier cup to infobox
• "back-to-back national championships" in lead. perhaps change to vanier cup
• "As a dependable Canadian back-up" in lead. Was he actually a backup? the body didn't say. I was assuming he was a starter on defense?
• "retiring in 1966 to accept a position at the University of Manitoba" was that a coaching job
• "induction to the Manitoba Sports Hall of Fame" hes not on the article for that? also can you include the year
• "induction to the Winnipeg Blue Bombers Hall of Fame" add year
• link Regina, Saskatchewan
• remove refs from lead
• All-Star is written differently in the lead and body. Use "All-Star" since that's what's in the infobox
• If Weston Wildcats is a redlink in the body, redlink it in the infobox

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

 Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA comments

• do you see any good images of his playing career besides the cards?
  • A lot of cards, not many others. Could probably crop the 1963 CFL post card which is probably best – thoughts?
    • Just do whatever you think is best. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:40, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
• add CFL to lead perhaps
  • Done.
• add height and weight
  • Done.
• infobox says cfl all star but that was West all star per statscrew and 1965 CFL season
  • Changed.
• add 3× to infobox by grey cup
  • Done.
• add high school to infobox
  • Done.
• "In 1960" That is linked and so are some other years but I don't think we usually do that.
  • Removed year links.
• "over the Hamilton Tiger-Cats" remove hamilton
  • Done.
• "The Winnipeg Blue Bombers made" remove winnipeg
  • Done.
• "and scored three touchdowns, a career-high" change to "a career-high three touchdowns"
  • Done.
• add vanier cup to infobox
  • Done.
• "back-to-back national championships" in lead. perhaps change to vanier cup
  • Done.
• "As a dependable Canadian back-up" in lead. Was he actually a backup? the body didn't say. I was assuming he was a starter on defense?
  • I don't know – that was something someone added years back. Without a source to prove it I removed it.
• "retiring in 1966 to accept a position at the University of Manitoba" was that a coaching job
  • Clarified in the athletic department (not coaching).
• "induction to the Manitoba Sports Hall of Fame" hes not on the article for that? also can you include the year
  • Removed, since I'm not completely sure he was inducted.
• "induction to the Winnipeg Blue Bombers Hall of Fame" add year
  • Added.
• link Regina, Saskatchewan
  • Where?
    • IP removed it. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:41, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
• remove refs from lead
  • Done.
• All-Star is written differently in the lead and body. Use "All-Star" since that's what's in the infobox
  • Done.
• If Weston Wildcats is a redlink in the body, redlink it in the infobox
  • Done.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:37, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

  Looks good. Just waiting on the picture now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:42, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

  Image uploaded. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:48, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:37, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 04:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

This is a follow up on my prior review. All points have now been addressed. Passing the article. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

• I did a spot check of sources in the first review and did not find any more issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:00, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.