Talk:Herrenvolk (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:14, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Production info need in lede

   "At the industrial site" State what this is and its relation to the previous episode

   "bounty hunter (Brian Thompson." Needs a parenthesis after 'Thompson'

   "Mulder gets the drop on the Bounty Hunter" Make more encyclopedic

   "Meanwhile, the First Elder meets with The Smoking Man" Note (William B. Davis) after 'Man'

   "The appearance of Samantha Mulder, this time as a clone of her from when she was still a little girl, was used in the episode due to series creator Chris Carter's desire to bring her back as an important element of the show, referring to her as being part of the lifeblood of the series." Run on sentence. Break up.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

On hold for 7 days to straighten the issues out.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

I've dealt with your concerns for criterion 1. Is there anything else that needs addressed (I see you've marked crit 6 as but not specified anything)? GRAPPLE X 22:24, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

Oh, whoops, that was a mistake. Sorry about that. I pass this article!--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:32, 19 February 2012 (UTC)