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The prose is clear and concise, does not go into unnecessary detail in any of the sections. The prose is a decent length and is not tiring to read. No spelling mistakes from what I saw. I fixed a minor grammar issue and a sentence that had some problems. Other than that, the prose is just fine.
Has a good lead section that provides background information on the topic. I did not see any issues with the layout, words to watch, or list incorporation.
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
A list of references appears at the bottom of the page along with citations. The citations are appropriately displayed throughout the article
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
All in-line citations appear to be from reliable sources.
All images are relevant to the topic and have suitable captions
7. Overall assessment.
This article had only minor issues with grammar and sentence structure which I have since fixed. The prose was descriptive and to the point. The article didn't go into unnecessary details. There were no issues with the neutrality. Overall, a well rounded article. This article has officially passed the GA review and is now a Good Article. The only suggestion I have is that articles be made and linked (to the sections here) for some of the major manufactures if there is enough information.