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POV wording
editThe article reads like a PR piece, in that the wording tends towards the subjective instead of objective. For example, you should word it as "She supports Best Buddies because she BELIEVES it is a good cause" Saying it IS a good cause is a subjective statement Gladfeather (talk) 01:26, 31 August 2013 (UTC)gladfeather
- You have the power to change the wording if you don't like it. Dismas|(talk) 02:40, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
Untitled
editShe is obviously notable with the Playboy Playmate coverage, this should not be up for speedy deletion at all MrShamrock (talk) 06:50, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
I have already provided a video that she is going to be a playboy playmate. Playboy will usually acknowledge that she is a Miss April when the issue comes out. This should not be deleted at all. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hoang.pham19 (talk • contribs) 06:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Married name
editHer name is now Hope Smith, as per [1]
Ulmanor (talk) 15:48, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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Edit Request
editThis edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello
I work with MUTHA and would like some information about the company added to the founder's article.
First, I would like her headshot returned to the page. Link to image: [2]
In the first paragraph, I would like the title "entrepreneur" added since she founded and runs a company. I would also like the following sentence added to the first paragraph:
She is the founder and CEO of MUTHA, a skincare company, and was the host of Inside Fashion.
Under Career, I would like the following information added:
Entrepreneurship
Smith opened her first business, Oasis Med Spa, in Houston, Texas, in 2005.[1] She received an aesthetician license prior to opening the medical spa, which she sold for an undisclosed amount in 2007.[1]
Smith is the founder and CEO of MUTHA, a skincare company.[2] The brand is projected to net $3 million USD in 2021.[1]
As of 2020, MUTHA donated 5% of sales to maternal care programs in regions with high maternal mortality rates.[2][3]
Thank you.
References
- Done Please see the Wikimedia Upload Wizard site for information on how to upload photos to Wikimedia Commons. Once a photo is uploaded, please submit a new edit request. Heartmusic678 (talk) 13:00, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
New Edit Request
editAn impartial editor has reviewed the proposed edit(s) and asked the editor with a conflict of interest to go ahead and make the suggested changes. |
Thank you Heartmusic678 for your help. I've uploaded the image I'd like added to the page to Wikimedia Commons with proper licensing and attribution to the photographer. This is the file name:
File:Hope Dworaczyk Smith- Founder and CEO of MUTHA.jpg|thumb|Hope Dworaczyk Smith- Founder and CEO of MUTHA
Can the first two sentences of the article be updated to read as follows: Hope Dworaczyk Smith is an American entrepreneur, Playboy model, TV host and reality television personality. She is the founder and CEO of MUTHA, a skincare company, and was the host of Inside Fashion.
Thank you.
- Since I haven't heard back and there are so many requests in line, I went ahead and made this change since I don't think it violates any guidelines. If someone has an issue, please let me know A58m6j4 (talk) 14:49, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Looks good, I have removed the edit request tenmplate. SpencerT•C 06:42, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
COI Edit Request
editHello. I work for MUTHA and am messaging with another request. I noticed that an editor has removed “entrepreneur” from the first sentence on the page. Could we have it re-added so it states “Hope Dworaczyk is an American entrepreneur, model, and reality television personality.” Hope is the CEO of the skincare company MUTHA and has also opened a med spa. Here are the sources verifying that she’s an entrepreneur:
Thank you!
~~~~A58m6j4 A58m6j4 (talk) 19:43, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
- Hello Wiki community - I removed this request from the queue and went ahead and implemented directly, as there appears to be no objections to adding it. Leaving this here so people can see the supporting sources. Thank you! A58m6j4 (talk) 17:19, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Name Change
editHello Wikipedia. I am a representative of Hope and am messaging from the COI account. Here to state that I updated her article title by moving the page, changing it from "Hope Dworaczyk" to "Hope Dworaczyk Smith." I meant to include some sources to verify in the edit description but I ran out of space. Here are some sources to verify her legal name as Hope Dworaczyk Smith:
https://mutha.com/pages/hope-dworaczyk-smith
https://www.businessinsider.com/day-in-life-of-hope-smith-founder-skincare-brand-mutha-2021-6 A58m6j4 (talk) 17:53, 11 January 2023 (UTC)