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Nominator: AskeeaeWiki (talk · contribs) 22:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 17:07, 6 April 2024 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section):   b (inline citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Hi, @AskeeaeWiki. I will be reviewing this article perhaps starting now (because today I'm going to my church's connection group, so my schedule is a little tight) to give you 2 GAs. Now I'm a little more confident in reviewing what happened in I Feel It Coming. Thank you for being so kind to me in the process. I assume you're sleeping for now, so I'll take the opportunity to put in as many observations as possible to speed up the process. Santi (talk) 17:07, 6 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Since I realize that Trilogy is a compilation album, there is no need to mention it.

Background and production

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  • "As McKinney played the Weeknd instrumentals for consideration" => "As McKinney played songs to the Weeknd for consideration"
      Done
  • Replace in ref 4 "cbc.ca" to "CBC". Wikilink.
  • Link Billboard on ref 5.
      Done
  • Add info about the song's inclusion on both album.
      Done
  • "On November 13, 2012, it was reissued as a part of his compilation album, Trilogy." => "Afterwards, it was included on the Weeknd's compilation album, Trilogy, on November 13, 2012."
      Done
  • Link compilation album.
      Done

Music and lyrics

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  • Reference 6 does not explicitly mention about a party. That's more what Billboard did.
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  • Move the ref 5 from "at the end" to "to sex."
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  • Move ref 1 from infobox to this section and complement the prose with it, which says that the song is alternative R&B. That source also needs authorship.
      Done
  • Link Impact.
      Done
  • Authorship for ref 8 (Daria Paterek)
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Critical reception

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  • "Pitchfork later placed it on its list of top 100 songs of 2011 at #57, with Eric Grandy saying it was "Tesfaye at his best, emoting in a androgynous falsetto one minute, muttering unbelievable curses the next." " => "They later ranked it at number 57 on their list of Top 100 Songs, with Eric Grandy saying it was "Tesfaye at his best, emoting in a androgynous falsetto one minute, muttering unbelievable curses the next." " Since the name of the author of the first Pitchfork article is not mentioned in this article, this practice is acceptable.
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  • Change template to "cite magazine" in ref 7 and move "Rolling Stone" from "author1" to "magazine".
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  • "Rolling Stone declared "House of Balloons / Glass Table Girls" as the Weeknd's 9th best track, " => "ranked"
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  • "Rolling Stone placed the first part of the song at #488 on its 2021 and 2024 edition of the 500 best songs of all time." => "They also ranked its first part 488th on their 2021 revision of the 500 Greatest Songs of All Time." Move to the next paragraph.
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  • Problems with ref 12.
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  • "Complex further wrote" => "They further wrote"
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  • Reuse ref 13 after "melancholic R&B." and add authorship.
      Done

Live performances

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  • "The Weeknd performed the song for his first ever show in the United States." Is it another show or the Coachella one?
    It is the Coachella one, I cleared that up.
  • Link "Billboard" in ref 15.
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  • Fix ref 21.
      Done

Personnel

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  • Modify the structure of the reference a little. "{{cite web|url=https://music.apple.com/us/song/house-of-balloons-glass-table-girls-original/1558942156|title=House of Balloons / Glass Table Girls (Original)|website=[[Apple Music]]|access-date=April 5, 2024}}" => "{{cite web |publisher=[[Apple Music]] |title=House of Balloons / Glass Table Girls (Original){{spaced ndash}}Song by The Weeknd |url=https://music.apple.com/us/song/house-of-balloons-glass-table-girls-original/1558942156 |access-date=April 7, 2024 |url-status=live}}" Can it be archived?
      Partly done: When I attempted to archive it, the website did not load.

Certifications

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  • Passed.
  • Delete "Notes" section.

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