Talk:Humam-i Tabrizi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 21:02, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:02, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Images are appropriately licensed. Sources are reliable.

• "Shams al-Din Juvayni—who was the minister of Ilkhanate": what does "the minister of Ilkhanate" mean? Does it just mean he was an official in the Ilkhanate government, in which case I'd make it something like "who was a minister of the Ilkhanate government"? Or does it mean more than that?

Hmm.. I'm not sure what to say. Sources also sometimes use the title of grand vizier instead, so it would be the equivalent of that. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:23, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

Maybe just use "grand vizier" instead then? The problem is that "minister" is such a general title readers will be uncertain how to interpret it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:31, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

Gotcha - done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:33, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

• You have a mixture of spellings; "honor" is AmEng; "favour" is BrEng. Which is it meant to be?

Hiya Mike. I hope you don't mind me writing inbetween your comment, thought it would make it easier to track whats fixed and whats not. I prefer BrEng, and therefore I have changed honor to honour. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:01, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

• "and of his ghazals is also mentioned": looks like a word or two is missing here?

Removed it, as it wasn't really that important. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:20, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:16, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:41, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

Awesome, thank you very much for reviewing this! --HistoryofIran (talk) 01:09, 16 August 2022 (UTC)