Talk:I Care So Much That I Don't Care at All/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 19:35, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 21:48, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

ok, why not // Chchcheckit (talk) 21:48, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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review pending below, when i finish it. in the meantime here's some initial stuff.

Comments

• honestly covers most bases in terms of scope and context.
• suggestion: NME notes that the tour he embarked on was the first with an actual live band, probably worth mentioning in promotion. also you could add abba the 1975 bon iver (also from nme cover story) and mura masa (the last one is found here) to that line in background about influences
• all sources are reliable
• artwork has non free use rationale; no other media

stuff to address:

• Copyvio issues (earwig): 3 sources flagged (pitchfork, dork, metacritic). You can fix the issue with dork by removing the quote box since it's kinda redundant. The other issues appear to be more with overuse of quotations: try to put what they say (especially Pitchfork: 49.7% vio) into your own words instead (attribute where necessary)

otherwise i have like little to no issues. gonna check some of the sources listed (aint much other interviews i could search for) yeah // Chchcheckit (talk) 22:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Sounds good, I'll change the quotes into my own words; I didn't realize how much I relied on quotes. Locust member (talk) 22:59, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Added in the additional influences and the fact his tour had a live band. All references are under 40% on earwig now. Locust member (talk) 23:40, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

@Locust member good going! i've done a few minor copyedits but here's what's left

• Lead: I Care So Much That I Don't Care at All is primarily emo pop and indie pop, a departure from Glaive's original hyperpop sound. do without the red line as you already mention glaive's transition away from hyperpop in the first paragraph of lead, so it's kinda redundant
• suggestion: specify when north america tour happens (between july and august 2023, per cited brooklynvegan source). also: uk/european tour for album occurs in november per this source

otherwise having checked through the sources for the songs section (plus 1 minor tweak) im pretty happy with this article. // Chchcheckit (talk) 11:08, 18 November 2024 (UTC)