Talk:I Want You (SB19 song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gained (talk · contribs) 13:38, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

This is my first GA review, I'll try my best not to screw up. Gained (talk) 13:38, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

Hi, Gained! Thank you for reviewing the article for GA! I truly appreciate it, especially since it is your first GAN review. I will make sure to address your comments right away; will ping once finished. – Abacusada (t • c) 15:00, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

Hi, Gained! I have put your suggestions into action. Let me know if you have anything else. Once again, thank you! – Abacusada (t • c) 15:40, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

Wonderful work Abacusada! Passing... :) Gained (talk) 16:00, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

Thank you! – Abacusada (t • c) 10:39, 12 January 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• "I Want You" (stylized in all uppercase) is a song recorded by the Filipino boy band SB19, taken from their second extended play (EP), Pagtatag!, which was released on June 9, 2023, via Sony Music Philippines. This seems a lot for the first sentence, it should probably be reworded. I also suggest replacing "via" with "by" since it somewhat contradicts the info elaborated in "Background and release"

  Done: Split into two sentences; the release part is now at the end of the lead paragraph, let me know if that is okay. I will take note "via"/"by" in the future.

• The image and infobox looks good
• Reviews from music critics applauded the boy band's ability to cross genres appears to be pretty reasonable for the reviews

Background and release

• SB19 and record producer August Rigo Include "the" before "record producer"

  Done

• Spotcheck on "Sony Music Philippines released the EP on June 9, 2023" – no issues

Composition and lyrics

• "I Want You" is three minutes and 43 seconds long. This should be written in numbers or spelled out as per MOS:NUMNOTES

  Done: Fully spelled out

• The song was written by the song's producer, August Rigo, and the band's leader, Pablo. Repetition of "The song" in close proximity.

  Done: Replaced the first "The song" with "It"

• Spot check on two critics of Nylon Manila describing the track as "sensually-themed" — The quote does not seem to appear on both articles

  Partially removed: Removed "themed" in "sensually-themed"; the "sensual" part is mentioned in both articles

Critical reception

• The song was met with positive reviews from music critics. seems reasonable for the critical consensus
• Spotcheck on "Rafael Bautista considered the song an "immersive track" and noted how the song showcased the boy band's raw passion and emotions" — no issues
• Spotcheck on "The song was nominated for the Wishclusive R&B Performance of the Year award at the Wish 107.5 Music Awards 2024." — no issues

Promotion

• The image looks good!
• Spotcheck on "The boy band first performed the song on the noontime variety show ASAP Natin 'To on June 11, 2023" — no issues

Credits and personnel

• No issues.

References

• The copyvio score looks great at 18%!
• All of the references looks good

Abacusada, I have finished the review and overall the article looks great. I think it just need some copyediting and tweaks to be listed to GA status. Gained (talk) 11:03, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Queen of Hearts talk 19:06, 14 February 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that the music video for "I Want You", a song by the Filipino boy band SB19, showed scenes of the boy band shot underwater? Source: Batislaong, Acer (June 14, 2023). "SB19 Captivates in Their 'I Want You' Music Video". Nylon Manila. Archived from the original on January 5, 2024. Retrieved January 6, 2024.
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Improved to Good Article status by Abacusada (talk). Self-nominated at 14:24, 15 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/I Want You (SB19 song); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Everything looks good - just waiting on the QPQ. Gatoclass (talk) 13:04, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Hi, Gatoclass! Thanks for reviewing the hook! I am aware of the QPQ requirement, and as of the moment, this hook would be my third DYK entry (out of five, which the requirement imposes), which, if I'm not mistaken, makes me and this hook an exemption from the rule for now. I want to go through five DYK nominations before reviewing other hooks so that I won't make a mistake. – Abacusada (t • c) 14:39, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

All good then, cheers. Gatoclass (talk) 15:39, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Thanks! – Abacusada (t • c) 04:38, 19 January 2024 (UTC)