Talk:Independencia (film)
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Lugnuts in topic Peer Editing Review
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Peer Editing Review
editHi,
I chose your article for review for our Interpersonal Media class. The article is very well written. I just made a few copyediting changes (which you can see in the view history section). I also went through and linked the names of the cast, as well as the information from the Cannes Film Festival; I think it is important to give readers a chance to click through to other pages at any point in the article, instead of making them have to go back to the very top. Also, in the very last paragraph, there is a quote that does not have attribution. You cited it in your references, but it is unclear, just from looking at the page, who it is credited to. Good luck with your article. Knicoladyes (talk) 12:55, 21 October 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the edits and feedback. Lugnuts Dick Laurent is dead 18:00, 21 October 2014 (UTC)