Talk:Jacqueline Ceballos

Latest comment: 7 years ago by CactusWriter in topic Removal of sourced content

Removal of sourced content

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@Hmlarson:, you have again removed the sentence: "Her husband helped her open an export-import clothing business in New York which provided her the means to separate from him and return to the United States." Source: "Jacqui Ceballos, VFA President, Founder". Autobiography. www.vfa.us. Retrieved 2012-06-15..) Your edit summary states "not cited in source." Yet in the source, Ceballos states: My husband returned home as though nothing had happened, but I was different, and so was our marriage. Finally he helped me start an export-import clothing business so I could travel back and forth to New York. What a joy to be there again. I knew I'd never return to Bogota. Clearly, it is in the source. I have no problem if you wish to make improvements to the wording -- that is always welcome. But cutting sentences of sourced content requires a valid reason. I would appreciate having some clarification. CactusWriter (talk) 18:58, 17 March 2017 (UTC)Reply