Talk:Jacqueline Kennedy's 1962 goodwill tour of India and Pakistan
Latest comment: 2 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination
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 | A fact from Jacqueline Kennedy's 1962 goodwill tour of India and Pakistan appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 May 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:00, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
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Jacqueline Kennedy at the Taj Mahal, 1962
... that like Princess Diana, Jacqueline Kennedy (pictured) was photographed alone outside the Taj Mahal during her trip to India in 1962?Source: [1]- Reviewed: Hey, Hey, Rise Up!
- Comment: someone might kindly crop the image if ok to.
Created by Whispyhistory (talk). Self-nominated at 17:35, 7 April 2022 (UTC).
- If cropped further, it won't be obvious what the building is. Was Jackie copying Diana?
- ALT1: ... that despite Jacqueline Kennedy (pictured) not wanting to make her clothes the focus of her 1962 goodwill tour of India and Pakistan, it was estimated that she wore 22 different outfits in the first nine days? Philafrenzy (talk) 09:49, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- Understood, thank you. Does ALT1 need to be trimmed? Whispyhistory (talk) 11:07, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- ALT1a: ... that Jacqueline Kennedy (pictured) didn't want to make her clothes the focus of her 1962 goodwill tour of India and Pakistan, but still wore 22 different outfits in the first nine days? Philafrenzy (talk) 12:17, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Whispyhistory: I've corrected a typo in the article that you might have missed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:59, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Reviewing in return for Hey, Hey, Rise up!
Detailed article on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I don't care about the original hook, collecting links to two celebrities before getting to the focus. (Almost every tourist going to the place is photographed. Diana was 30 years after JK.) Even in the ALTs, I suggest to mention the tour first - your choice. ALT1a preferred. I suggest you do crop the image substantially for the purpose of ALT1. Some may even recognize the building when cropped. - No idea what the See also section is supposed to achieve. They should be linked in the body, and nothing linked in the body should be See also. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:02, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks @Gerda Arendt:... I'll sort see also out soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 17:08, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
