Talk:Jane Kelsey

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Realitylink in topic Revision and updating of this article

Marxism

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Shouldn't there be a reference to Kelsey being a Marxist? This has a major bearing on her views and activities.Royalcourtier (talk) 19:19, 28 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

Do you have a reference for this. Not one where her enemies call her a Marxist, but from a neutral party?-gadfium 23:56, 28 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

Revision and updating of this article

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Hi all, this article needs structure and a re-organisation of the lead section to give an introduction and summary of the key content - which can be expanded in subsequent sections. This from the Wikipedia guidelines about the lead section is helpful: "The lead should stand on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic. It should identify the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies. The notability of the article's subject is usually established in the first few sentences. As in the body of the article itself, the emphasis given to material in the lead should roughly reflect its importance to the topic, according to reliable, published sources. Apart from basic facts, significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article." At the time of writing Kelsey has just given her valedictory lecture so this will change some of the content and grammatical structure. I will have a look at the article and gather references before updating. Feedback and more ideas very welcome here. Realitylink (talk) 22:57, 2 August 2022 (UTC)Reply