Wiki Education assignment: 19th Century Concert Life

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2023 and 12 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Rachel1760 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Jmares3218 (talk) 03:40, 12 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Regarding the lead sentence

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I believe that the lead sentence of this article could be improved by changing "is a Korean-born flutist" to "is a professional flutist" and ",educated in the US, living in Austria" to "who was educated in the U.S. and is currently living in Austria.Rachel1760 (talk) 05:10, 12 February 2023 (UTC)Reply