Talk:Jim Mueller/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (No original research):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

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  • added florida gators, pilots, kentucky, Marine Corps reservists cats, college football announcers, radio announcers, hurricane and dolphins announcers, racing drivers cats
  • "He was signed by the Baltimore Colts in the National Football League (NFL) after college, but a severe ankle injury in training camp ended his playing career." I always see exagerrated stories like this. Im not sure if he actually signed.
    • Hmmm... I haven't located a signing story either... what about He had a training camp stint with the Baltimore Colts of the National Football League (NFL) after college, but his playing career was ended by a severe ankle injury?
      • Changed the wording a bit - what do you think?
  • link nascar, ISC (International Speedway Corporation), ford, chevrolet and roger penske perhaps
    • Links added.
  • "Throughout the mid-2000s until 2018, Mueller also did public address at other NASCAR/ISC owned tracks. " dont see this in ref 1
    • I was wondering where I got that from, but then I saw it was added unsourced from this IP - as I can't verify it, I removed it.
  • ref 2 said he playes semi pro football in orlando
    • Added.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:09, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:05, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply