Talk:Jim Mueller/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- added florida gators, pilots, kentucky, Marine Corps reservists cats, college football announcers, radio announcers, hurricane and dolphins announcers, racing drivers cats
- "He was signed by the Baltimore Colts in the National Football League (NFL) after college, but a severe ankle injury in training camp ended his playing career." I always see exagerrated stories like this. Im not sure if he actually signed.
- Hmmm... I haven't located a signing story either... what about
He had a training camp stint with the Baltimore Colts of the National Football League (NFL) after college, but his playing career was ended by a severe ankle injury
?- Changed the wording a bit - what do you think?
- Hmmm... I haven't located a signing story either... what about
- link nascar, ISC (International Speedway Corporation), ford, chevrolet and roger penske perhaps
- Links added.
- "Throughout the mid-2000s until 2018, Mueller also did public address at other NASCAR/ISC owned tracks. " dont see this in ref 1
- I was wondering where I got that from, but then I saw it was added unsourced from this IP - as I can't verify it, I removed it.
- ref 2 said he playes semi pro football in orlando
- Added.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:09, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:05, 26 October 2023 (UTC)