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Hello! I'll be reviewing this article to help reduce the good article nomination backlog and to gain points in the WP:WIKICUP. Although quid pro quo is not required, if you fancy returning the favor, I have a list of articles in need of review here. — GhostRiver17:48, 15 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
To be pedantic, "three small fractures" is not the same as "three fractured bones" as the source says, particularly if the fractures were in the skull, in which case they'd be in different places on the same bone
"After missing several months of the season"
"His seven appearances" → "All seven appearances he made"
"first major league starts" Shouldn't that be singular? Next sentence only refers to "the game"
Should probably say what the Hutch Award is for
""arguably [the Grizzlies'] best starter."" → ""arguably [the Grizzlies'] best starter"." per MOS:LQ
Switch the second "posting" to "recording" to vary sentence structure a bit
I'd throw in this Post-Gazette article, which includes the line The bullpen, manager John Russell said, is where Martinez will stay, though he has also done some starting.
Specify as noted here that he signed with Cleveland on a minor-league contract with a spring training invite
Elaborate on the Francona comment; what kind of mess was he thrown into to work out of?
"could call up" → "could promote" to diversify sentence structures
"He made some starts for the Salt Lake Bees of the Pacific Coast League, losing all three" → "He lost all three starts that he made for the Salt Lake Bees of the Pacific Coast League, posting"
I have a subscription to The Athletic, which has an article with a lot of good details on his family and new job that can be added to this section. Would you like me to send the full text your way?
That would be great! Do you want to paste it here (and then we can remove it once the edits are made)? If that doesn't violate any copyright. Or, you could add stuff that you think might be relevant from it since you have access to it, though that might be time-consuming for you. Let me know if either of these options works for you! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 23:14, 15 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for making those changes – I added the Athletic information myself to avoid any copyright concerns. Happy to pass! — GhostRiver21:33, 16 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
