Talk:John Charles Lounsbury Fish

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Latest comment: 6 years ago8 comments6 people in discussion

In general, the article is very straightforward and gives a general idea about John C. L. Fish. But needs many improvements. As stated in the article he was a significant person, but he is underrepresented in this article because there is just wage description of his career. Mci2014 (talk) 19:41, 5 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
- Anything specific you would recommend ?... Risk Engineer (talk) 19:22, 17 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
The article's timeline was distracting due (to) its list format. The list needs a backstory or a more respectable take on his accomplishments. I feel like if there was a Wikipedia page of me and had a timeline of my few great accomplishments it could seem so insignificant. Kjair715 (talk) 21:39, 5 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
- Anything specific you would recommend ?... Risk Engineer (talk) 19:22, 17 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
Try to avoid entirely copying from other online resources. Az1167 (talk) 23:55, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Ahmed ZakriaReply
Please use multiple references in your article, it will help the credibility of your article. camie22 (talk)15:47, 4 March 2018 (UTC)~~Reply
Not enough information. I'd try to have a good research on his publications and write about how it has helped the civil engineering industry. Prabinpoudel1831 (talk) 21:05, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

I will rewrite the article to confirm with the biography project recommendations for article layout .. Cheers ... Risk Engineer (talk) 14:42, 24 October 2018 (UTC)Reply