Talk:John Jones (American football executive)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:45, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:45, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

• No photo available?
  • Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:13, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
• Link collective bargaining agreement, anti-trust lawsuit, salary cap, expansion team
  • First instance of each all linked. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:13, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
• year-round destination and an expanded atrium provided Awkward
  • Reworded. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:13, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
• hyphenate larger market teams as it's a compound adjective--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:05, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Hyphenated. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:13, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

Thanks Sturmvogel 66, I think I got everything. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:13, 10 March 2024 (UTC)