Talk:Justfly.com

Latest comment: 5 months ago by Encoded in topic Some proposed changes

Some proposed changes

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Existing text '''Justfly.com (JustFly Inc)''' is a Canadian online [[travel agency]] and [[metasearch engine]]. It is a subsidiary of FlightHub Group.
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Your proposed text justfly.com™, a Momentum Ventures subsidiary, is an online [[travel agency]] created to reach the [[North America|North American]] market. Partnering with more than 400 [[Airline|airlines]] that travel to and from the [[United States|U.S]]., justfly.com makes [[travel]] accessible, enabling more people to visit new places and explore new [[Culture|cultures]]. Since 2014, the company has been focused on offering the best travel options while providing a user-friendly and efficient customer experience. More can be found at [https://www.justfly.com/ justfly.com.]

* Reason for the change: want to make sure the full service, offerings and company story is represented

* References supporting change: "Leading Online Travel Agency justfly.com Announces Partnership with BabyQuip" (Press release). Business Wire. February 28, 2024.


Alyshaguenther (talk) 19:08, 26 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Not done: A majority of the requested changes are currently written in a promotional tone. Please review WP:Neutral point of view and ensure you follow this before submitting any edit requests. HouseBlaster (talk · he/him) 03:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Some proposed changes

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Existing text '''Justfly.com (JustFly Inc) is a Canadian online [[travel agency]] and [[Metasearch engine|metasearch engine.]] It is a subsidiary of FlightHub Group.
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justfly.com™, a Momentum Ventures subsidiary, is an online [[travel agency]] created to reach the [[North America|North American]] market. justfly.com™ partners with more than 400 [[Airline|airlines]]that travel to and from the [[United States|U.S.]]
Justfly.com is a Canadian company and subsidiary of FlightHub Group. The company was founded in 2012 in [[Montreal]]and justfly.com was created in 2014 to offer international and domestic travel options to American consumers.
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In 2014, justfly.com™, a Momentum Ventures subsidiary, was launched to reach the [[American]]market.
  • Reason for the change: want to make sure the full service, offerings and company story is represented
  • References supporting change: ("JustFly," n.d.). Crunchbase.
Alyshaguenther (talk) 13:22, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Not done: Needs reliable sources, also contains promotional wording Encoded  Talk 💬 21:18, 4 May 2024 (UTC)Reply