Talk:K-3 (Kansas highway)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- In the route description, you begin two consecutive sentences with "North of". One of these should be changed.
- Yeah, I used that transition too often. Fixed.
- The sentence "After this intersection, the highway crosses the Little Osage River, then leaves Bourbon County and enters Linn County." sounds awkward. I would remove the mention of leaving Bourbon County because by stating it is entering Linn County, you are already implying it is leaving the previous county mentioned.
- Rewritten.
- "By 1950, the portion of K-3 in Crawford County had been paved, leaving the remainder of the route yet to be improved" I don't see the need for the rest of the sentence after the comma since that is already implied.
- I guess that is pretty redundant. Axed.
- In the route description, you begin two consecutive sentences with "North of". One of these should be changed.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Can some more historical details be added to the lead?
- Did the best I can. There's not the greatest amount of history on this.
- Can some more historical details be added to the lead?
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
I will place the article on hold for a few small fixes to be made. Dough4872 17:26, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- I believe I have addressed all of your issues. TCN7JM 20:32, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- I will now pass the article. Dough4872 21:09, 3 May 2013 (UTC)