Talk:Kulsoom Nawaz
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editShe is the granddaughter of the great Kashmiri wrestler Gama. A pure Kashmiri Butt. These are converts from Kashmiri Brahmin Hindu Butts. A British traveler in the 19th century has written that many Kashmiris (both Hindus and Muslims.The latter are mostly converts from Kashmiri Hindus) were built like Hercules. Thus Gama and Rahim both Kashmiri Butts were great wrestlers.
PhD?
editDoes she really have a phd or is it just an imagination of someone ? please provide source to verify this claim. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Digitalsurgeon (talk • contribs) 21:56, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 27 July 2018
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[1] Begum Kalsoom Nawaz is currently in a hospital in London. No sources have claimed of her death so far it is a false speculation. [2] x:
y: Alive 3uzair (talk) 15:23, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
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Already done ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 20:33, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
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"wrong death date please remove the false date of death" Omega3322 (talk) 15:33, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- Already done ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 20:34, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
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Remove 'Died July 2018' because She is currently alive and on life support Icetlives (talk) 15:43, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- Already done ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 20:34, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
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Need to remove Asif zardari and some other text which is wrong. Developer84 (talk) 15:59, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
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1- Kulsoom Nawaz opens eyes as health improves: family 1- https://www.pakistantoday.com.pk/2018/07/27/kulsoom-nawaz-opens-eyes-as-health-improves-family/ 2- Kulsoom Nawaz's health showing signs of improvement: Hassan Nawaz 2- https://dunyanews.tv/en/Pakistan/449587-Kulsoom-Nawaz-showing-little-signs-of-improvement-Hassan-Nawaz 959ali (talk) 11:32, 29 July 2018 (UTC)
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Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. — Newslinger talk 11:53, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
'Spouse ... terms'
edit... had been the Spouse of the Prime Minister of Pakistan Nawaz Sharif for three non-consecutive terms.
- This reads as if being the "spouse" (why not wife?) of the prime minister of Pakistan were an official elective office. Sca (talk) 14:25, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
It sbould be first lady of Pakistan for non-conservative three terms rather than spouse...... Lucman aly (talk) 05:06, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
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The first line in the article is ambiguous and it may mean that she was Spouse of Nawaz Sharif for three terms which is not true. "Kulsoom Nawaz Sharif was a Pakistani politician who had been the Spouse of the Prime Minister of Pakistan Nawaz Sharif for three non-consecutive terms; from 1990 to 1993, 1997 to 1999 and then from 2013 to 2017"
A better way to write this is: "Kulsoom Nawaz Sharif, wife of Nawaz Sharif, was a Pakistani politician as "Spouse of the Prime Minister of Pakistan" for three non-consecutive terms; from 1990 to 1993, 1997 to 1999 and then from 2013 to 2017." Writing Nawaz Sharif in the statement may lead to dual meaning. Sneh Shahani (talk) 12:11, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
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