Talk:Khadir and Bangar

Latest comment: 6 years ago by 202.156.182.84 in topic Enhancements

Enhancements

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I made few enhancements to the article

  1. Added more sources
  2. Expanded the definition of Khadir based on the source and also added its alternative name Nali/नाली (flood plain area/channel where water can flow during floods) based on the source
  3. Sub-types of barani land added and their relationship with each other explained.
  4. Other related land usage types added.
  5. Pipelinking to other articles enhanced to show relationship with other related concepts.

Please review. Instead of revert, please use iterative-increment enhancement by rephrasing or as a last resourt take out any highly objectionable section. After this enhancements, article now has richer text in depth and breadth, less statements that are unsourced. Though there are still limited number of some unsourced statements left, please help improve by finding the sources. I too will try to find sources for the in future. Thanks. PS: Treat IPs and their edits with equal respect. In case you revert (assuming no lazy reverts), please put due effort in reviewing the edits properly, and leave a detailed "specific-actionable" explanation like I left above, so that we can continue to collaborate. This way other editors can also see the logic and partake in the discussion/edits/suggestions. 202.156.182.84 (talk) 10:44, 3 April 2018 (UTC)Reply