Talk:Kill the Lights (Britney Spears song)

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NOT A SINGLE

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Kill The Lights is NOT a single. A video was made from a "fan site". The art work is fake also. This needs to be changed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by MichaelB722 (talkcontribs) 04:12, 1 August 2009 (UTC)Reply


Not Promo Single

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The video was made through her official site. however its just to promote the album, and get the fans involved. I Think the Article should be kept up. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Apeaboutsims (talkcontribs) 06:08, 1 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Changed! PlatinumFire (talk) 11:52, 1 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Template:Britney Spears singles navbox

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Since there seem to be differing opinions about adding {{Britney Spears singles}} to this article: "Kill the Lights" hasn't been released as a single of course, but that template lists Spears's other notable songs as well, among them "Kill the Lights". I think it should of course be added here.
Opinions?Amalthea 17:49, 7 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

I keep adding it but someone keeps removing it! All other songs in the Notable Songs section have the template in their articles so Kill the Lights also should have it! PlatinumFire (talk) 13:36, 8 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

CD SINGLE?!?!?!?!?!

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Can someone verify this? Haven't heard it anywhere.User:Cprice1000 (Cprice1000 14:34, 1 August 2010 (UTC))Reply

Requested move

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: not moved. Andrewa (talk) 06:42, 18 August 2011 (UTC)Reply


Kill the LightsKill the Lights (song) – It needs to be disambiguated in some way to avoid confusion with The New Cities album "Kill the Lights (album)" DanielFarad (talk) 22:39, 10 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Kill the Lights/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk message contribs count logs email) 09:48, 2 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • that talks about the singer's relationship -> that alludes too   Done
  • who considered the song a sequel -> it   Done
  • considered, considered   Done
  • rmv did   Done
  • italicize Billboard   Done
  • and visiting another planet full of lights -> I expect better grammar   Done
  • was featured   Done


Background

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  • Link LR   Done
  • confirmed development of the album -> GR (What is this? - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:47, 2 September 2011 (UTC))Reply
  • That long sentence should be separated and proper punctuation should be placed   Done
  • He said he was inspired by Hans Zimmer's scores, such as Pirates of the Caribbean soundtracks -> He credited "" as a primary source of inspiration
  • On November 13, 2008, the song leaked a month before the album's official release -> Th song leaked on November 13, 2008, a full month before the album's official release
  • on the forth season
  • How was it featured? (Played, intro song. etc.?)
  • along with "Circus"' Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix. -> rmv double quote. Also, better "the Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix of "Circus".

Composition

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  • The sample needs a much more in depth descriptive rational (with sources)
  • that talks about -> again
  • was considered as a sequel of it, -> was considered its sequel
  • the fact that Spears is introduced by Danja as "Our very own Pop princess / Now Queen of Pop" -> Why?
  • claiming the singer's vocals are heavily processed in the song -> while describing her vocals as heavily produced

Reception

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  • "Kill the Lights" received positive reviews from music critics -> NPOV. There are negative reviews as well
  • Too many "ands" being used as connectors
  • Too many "saids"
  • me","
  • Link TS
  • Link Madonna
  • MoS issues. When in quotes, the album should appear 'Blackout'
  • This section needs a lot of tightening
  • On the dated
  • while its host album Circus -> parent
  • sixty-nine on Pop 100,
  • seventy-two on Pop 100 Airplay

Music video

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  • No need to write "Britney.com". -> Official website is enough
  • The winner of the contest would get to see their story becoming a plot for an official music video of a song -> needs significant re-writing
  • for "Kill the Lights" title "Known Everywhere", that was revealed on February 11, 2009, -> Read this out loud. You are missing some things
  • are in the back taking -> background?
  • Right after, wee see an animated Spears -> poor writing; also, your hand appeared to have gone numb while pressing the E key :P
  • he last three lines really need more professional writing

Credits

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References

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  • Several are missing accessdates
    1. 1 should appear in italics and as People, not People.com. Also, you are missing a publisher
  • Same for 2
  • What's with 3?
  • What makes 5 reliable?
  • 6 should appear in a more detailed format
  • Why does Britney.com appear in both italics and not?
  • 10; publisher?
  • 11 needs work
  • Several newspapers require you to use the "cite news" template; #s 22, 23
  • Similar issues persist. Why is Allmusic is italics?
  • It's kind of weird reading it saying that there are "mixed" reviews, when only one review here is actually negative, if it must be qualified, it should say "mostly positive reviews", so I'm going to change it to that. --WikiDonn (talk) 06:13, 1 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Move discussion in progress

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