Talk:L. Roy Houck

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Yoninah in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk22:02, 3 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 20:18, 23 September 2020 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is close to meeting DYK criteria, and copyvio checks out. Looks like you still owe QPQ, though, @Muboshgu:? One concern I have is that many of the sources from Newspapers.com are behind a paywall, although not the hook's. Is there any possibility these newspapers are archived by a local public library or some similar institution where they are openly available? I also think you need to make a two quick orthographic updates to the article: 1) there's a typo / incomplete sentence in the Early life section - "He graduated from Gettysburg High School.[1] and began selling life insurance." ; and 2) in the same section, Hereford in Hereford cattle should be capitalized. As far as the hook goes, I think the first one is best, but may I suggest a tiny, one-word revision for concision:
  • ALT0b... that Dances with Wolves was filmed on a 60,000-acre (24,000 ha) ranch owned by L. Roy Houck, former lieutenant governor of South Dakota? Hportfacts5 (talk) 14:10, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Reply