Template:Did you know nominations/Tenzing Norgay National Adventure Award

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:55, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

Tenzing Norgay National Adventure Award

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INSV Tarini with members of Navika Sagar Parikrama leaving Cape Town

... that six members of Navika Sagar Parikrama (pictured), the all female crew circumnavigating the globe, were given the Tenzing Norgay National Adventure Award in 2017, India's highest adventure award? Source: [1] [2]

Created by Roller26 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:51, 25 September 2020 (UTC).

Article created in draftspace, moved to mainspace and nominated within the appropriate timeframe. Article is long enough. It appears to be written neutrally. The hook fact is cited inline in the article. This is the user's second DYK so QPQ is not required. The only issues is a lack of sourcing. I am adding tags inline for this. – Muboshgu (talk) 01:37, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

Muboshgu thanks for the review. I have done some major changes in the article plus I have added a photo with the hook. Let me know if this works. Thanks. Roller26 (talk) 14:03, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Comment: The hook is rather wordy. I suggest piping the link:
ALT1: ... that the six members of Navika Sagar Parikrama (boat pictured), an all-female crew circumnavigating the globe, were given India's highest adventure award in 2017? Yoninah (talk) 23:19, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Yoninah, this a better worded hook. Thanks. Roller26 (talk) 00:25, 29 September 2020 (UTC)

The page is considerably rewritten from when I reviewed it a few days ago. Looks good to me! I'm unclear about the Indian government copyright issue around that image, but it appears to be allowed? – Muboshgu (talk) 19:19, 30 September 2020 (UTC)