Talk:Lee Joannes

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review
Good articleLee Joannes has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starLee Joannes is part of the Green Bay Packers presidents series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 2, 2019Good article nomineeListed
April 1, 2024Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Kosack. Appreciate the review! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:28, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Initial review

Infobox

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  • Could do with a reference for his full name as I can't see it referenced in the main text anywhere.

Personal life

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  • The sentence "Joannes remarried in 1972 to Delia Joannes" makes it sound like her name was Joannes already and he married a family member.

In all honesty @Gonzo fan2007:, I'm having difficulty in finding anything really to complain about! Two minor issues above perhaps, so placed on hold until these are addressed. Kosack (talk) 19:59, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Kosack. I believe both comments have been addressed. His full name can be found in the Packers.com ref, and I have removed Delia's name from the article (her maiden name isn't in any references). « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:48, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Happy to promote this. Well written, suitably referenced and no copyvio concerns. Nice work. Kosack (talk) 20:52, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply