Talk:Life's Shop Window

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that when film producer William Fox first saw Life's Shop Window he suggested, "Let's burn the damn thing"?
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 12:13, 9 June 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 12:13, 9 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

I'll review it tomorrow; somehow I keep running out of time each day. Wizardman 01:46, 16 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Here are the issue I found:

  • "as $4500[b][16] or $6000" commas should be added to those dollar amounts.

That was the only thing I found, which I just went ahead and fixed myself. Should you want to take this to FAC, I'd suggest cleaning the plot a little bit. It took me a couple of reads to understand what precisely was going on in the film, and it does feel on the stilted side towards the end of the section (like several scenes pushed together rather than a single film, in a sense). Aside from that, everything else looks good, so I'll pass this. Wizardman 02:41, 17 June 2015 (UTC) ni byo koko ndabyemeye pe — Preceding unsigned comment added by Churlecturingsessionin masscommunication (talkcontribs) 01:06, 19 November 2018 (UTC)Reply