Loco de Amor (Jerry Rivera song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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"The songs in the album were" → "The album's songs were"
"Mary Lauret, and Alejandro Vennazi." → "Mary Lauret and Alejandro Vennazi" plus mention specifically in this sentence that Lauret composed the song since the chorus can be in its own sentence
The album being called a salsa release can stay in background but is not enough to source the song's genre; add a sentence saying "Musically "Loco de Amor" is a salsa song." or something similar, using the Vista ref to back this up
"Rivera sings in the chorus:" → "On the chorus, Rivera sings:" but this is not backed up by [1]
"called one of the album's stand outs while Billboard editor John Lannert cited as" → "called the track one of the album's stand outs while Billboard editor John Lannert cited it as"
Remove usage of the before Cashbox
"regarded it as" → "regarded the song as"
"The track was recognized as" → "It was recognized as"
On hold until everything has been fixed; my honour reviewing this after you left comments for my FAC not long ago! --K. Peake18:29, 27 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Kyle Peake, A thousand apologies for the super late reply. I have addressed pretty much everything, couple of things though. Sources like Vista mention that the whole album is salsa, it doesn't make any exceptions to any of the tracks. In this case, it's fine to call it a salsa track. Now for the lyrics, I'll admit this was a bit of a stretch. but I had to use Dónde Están los Ladrones? as a reference to just translating a song, since I honestly couldn't find a source about the song's lyrics. If this is not suitable, then I completely understand and will withdraw from the nomination. Erick (talk) 15:45, 31 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Magiciandude I don't mind for the salsa part, but the issue with the lyrics is rather that no source mentions those as being sang than any translation you have added. --K. Peake17:16, 31 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Kyle Peake, I've decided that I'll withdraw from the nomination. It's my responsibility for not providing a reliable source for the song's lyrics. It's okay, I have no hard feelings. I can try again sometime in the future. Erick (talk) 01:53, 1 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
On hold until everything has been fixed; my honour reviewing this after you left comments for my FAC not long ago! --K. Peake 18:29, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
