Talk:Lord Guildford Dudley/GA1/archive1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LittleMissWikipoo (talk) 16:37, 30 November 2009 (UTC) I'm dispensing with the 'checklist'. Good work! My only quibble is the popular culture section. If we must list films, then we must list every novel, play, comic book depiction, etc.. This sort of thing can get out of hand. I would prefer this section be completely removed. But the call is yours. Article is impeccably crafted, and sourced. A splendid addition to WP! PASS with congratulations. LittleMissWikipoo (talk) 16:37, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

I think that this was initially passed hastily; see discussion of this and other quick passes here. It still needs a little bit of work. The main thing is that the prose needs to be edited so that it flows smoothly and sounds more neutral. I put it back in the queue. MMagdalene722^{talk to me} 18:21, 1 December 2009 (UTC)