Talk:Lucinda Chambers

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MartinPoulter in topic Educational assignment

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This is a well-written, well-structured, appropriately styled article draft. There are a few things to change before it's suitable for a Wikipedia article. First, there needs to be a lead sentence explaining who Lucinda Chambers is and why she is of interest. The sources used as references are good, but it needs to be clear with inline citations which citation applies to which paragraph. Consider also adding some wikilinks, using the link button to link the Wikipedia articles about Anna Wintour, Vogue, etc. These are relatively small stylistic criticisms: you're well on the way to a decent article. Well done! MartinPoulter (talk) 10:43, 7 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Educational assignment

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This article was created in an educational assignment involving students from Bath Spa University. The version that has gone live includes content by User:Rowenelllis, User:Daisy blance and User:Emilyjnichols2, who each wrote separate drafts. Thanks to those students for improving Wikipedia. MartinPoulter (talk) 12:43, 12 February 2020 (UTC)Reply