 | Lynne Ramsay is currently a Media and drama good article nominee. Nominated by 222emilia222 (talk) at 21:58, 26 June 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: Scottish filmmaker |
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Nominator: 222emilia222 (talk · contribs) 21:58, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
Starting with sources. Earwig is not responding at the moment so I'll come back to it.
- You're using allmusic.com for the track listing of a CD; per Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums/Sources allmusic should not be used for material from the sidebar as it may be user generated. I think that basically means everything but the staff reviews should be treated as unreliable, but I'm open to correction if I've misunderstood.
- IMDB is unreliable per Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources.
Spotchecks; footnote numbers refer to this version.
- FN 2 cites "In 1995, she graduated from the National Film and Television School in Beaconsfield, England, where she specialised in cinematography and direction." The source doesn't say the school is in Beaconsfield; you would need another source for that if you want to keep it.
- FN 33 cites "[Stone Mattress] has been picked up by Amazon Studios". Verified.
- FN 15 cites "Ramsay said that Lawrence sent her a copy of the book, which is about postpartum depression and bipolar disorder, noting that the film itself would be funny, and confirmed that the movie would be her next film after the 2023 Hollywood strikes." Verified, but she does just say "probably" would be next in line; it might be better to reflect that.
- FN 28 cites " She later said she found her "soulmate in making movies" in Phoenix." Verified; I would extend the quote marks to make it "soulmate in making movies" since you're using the original sentence structure so closely.
- FN 22 cites "Ramsay denied the allegations in a statement made shortly after. A year after parting ways, the lawsuit was resolved out of court." Verified.
Just the "Beaconsfield" point; technically that's a spotcheck fail, but when you fix it I think checking one or two more would be enough for a pass. I'll continue with the review once the issues above are addressed. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:31, 2 July 2024 (UTC)