Talk:M19 Multiple Gun Motor Carriage/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Cerebellum in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 01:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 01:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- No issues with the image.
- External links good; the DAB links tool isn't working.
- The M19 MGMC had specifications to the M24 Chaffee. - Do you mean similar specifications?
Done - The M19 was developed from the T65 which was based on the M5 light tank chassis; initially as the T65E1 Multiple Gun Motor Carriage. - This confused me, do you mean that the original name for the M19 was the T65E1? Consider rephrasing. Done
- a production of 1,000 had been requested - 1,000 of what? The T65? Done
- I'd like to see more information on the Korean War service history. Here is a source mentioning use in the Pusan Perimeter.
- Are you sure that source is 100% reliable?--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:31, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Cerebellum: Found another source and took care of it.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:52, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- Are you sure that source is 100% reliable?--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:31, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- The bibliography says the Gander book was published in 2013, but you reference Gander 2010. Is this the same book? Same story with Green 2000/2014, and I don't know what Chamberlain & Ellis is. Done
Looks pretty good, I'll just put this on hold until we fix the above issues! --Cerebellum (talk) 00:45, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for making those correction so quickly! Pass. (Just so you know, though, I won't be able to finish the M21 Mortar Motor Carriage review until next weekend, sorry about that.) --Cerebellum (talk) 20:18, 16 August 2015 (UTC)