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"One of the most successful coaches in team history," Source? He had a losing record.
I changed to He developed some of the most successful teams in school history based on the source: Moon’s football teams were among the most successful in WSU history.
"and his older brother had to work to support the family, allowing him to attend Steinmetz College Prep" How did his brother working "allow" him to attend that high school?
Re-wrote to remove the 'allow' part.
Any idea what the nickname Moon means?
No idea.
link team captain.
Done.
"In 1946, he was hired by his alma mater" He has more than one alma mater.
Clarified.
"He led them to conference championships five times," the record table only has three.
I think the ref was including two as assistant coach – I clarified three as head coach.
Add his overall record at Winona State football to the body.
Done.
Maybe change the playing careers to c. 1938 to 1942?
Done.
Why does his Sandwich basketball stint say c. 1948–?, the other Sandwich sports say c. 1948–1953
Changed to 53 to align with the other sports – don't know why it was originally like that.
Why does Iron baseball only say 1954-1955?
See below.
I don't think he coached baseball in 1954 because that would have been in spring? Did he coach it in 1956?
He did coach in 1956. Its unclear whether he did in 1954. I put "c. 1954-1956" in the infobox.
Why is Iron track only one year in the infobox? It also said he started coaching track in his second year, so is that the 1955 or 1956 track season, was track in spring back then?
It would be 1955 if it was his second season. I'm not sure if he did it in 1956 (or if it was in the spring at the time) – I put "1955-c. 1956" in the infobox.
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