Talk:Madras Crocodile Bank Trust
Latest comment: 4 months ago by Reconrabbit in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 10:02, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Reconrabbit (talk · contribs) 14:45, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Reconrabbit Thanks for taking it up. Will address the comments as they come! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 15:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I copy-edited some minor things for clarity and grammar last week, and since no one else has started a review I will do it now.
Prose
edit- Lead provides a concise summary of the article's topics.
- Following the initial copy-edit, there are no contradictory or confusing sentences I've found.
References
edit- References are formatted correctly.
- External links appropriate.
- No copyright violations found, version is distinct from other language Wikipedias.
Sources check, numbers based on this revision:
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Date given is inconsistent and the source for this information does not look great. 1975 looks to be the correct year which agrees with this site and [6].Modified the source - [6]
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Not a very strong source, primary research only cited once. There is a possible better reference from C. J. Stevenson here.Added the source - [57]
Self-published source on a blog. Better references are available.Removed the source and tweaked the sentence - [77]
Images
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The infobox and caption states that the location is abbreviated "CrocBank" but this is never stated in the article or with a reference.resolved -
There are a lot of images, and one of the two pictures of the reptile demonstration building could be removed.removed one of the RDC images
Stability, neutrality, focus
edit- There are no edit wars, content disputes in the article's recent history. No maintenance tags on the article either.
- Article is written from a neutral point of view, and is not promotional of the topic.
- Broadly covers relevant information to the subject.
- The information on reptile stock may be too detailed and not generally useful to a reader. Is this kind of list standard in other wildlife conservation area articles? Referring to GAs of similar zoo articles (Very few are there!), there is a sea of blue i.e. laundry list of exhibits mentioned. There are no exact count of each animal species though. I am indifferent here. We can probably go with a list if the count seems to be too much data. Thanks!
- I was viewing it on a very wide screen before. It looks better with smaller aspect ratio. It's doing no harm keeping it in and doesn't go against MOS:TABLE. It's out of the scope of this review. Reconrabbit 01:02, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
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