Talk:Man on the Moon: The End of Day/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: — Legolas ^(talk2me) 13:56, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

I really like album articles where exactly everything is perfect. Well Crystal girl, here's to you, very few concerns..

• In the infobox, the recording date range should be 2007–09

done

• Allmusic shouldn't be italicized.

done

• never try to mix politics or witty things in with his lyrical conten... --> Witty things seems a little unencyclopedic prose, rephrase.

I have replaced the word with jocular.

• Monster Ball Tour --> Wikilink needs to be corrected

done

• In commercial performance, you say that the album sold 500,000 copies and was certified. --> You know what to correct :P

oops. done

• Pitchfork MEdia in critical reception should not be italicized. Actually see this throughout the article will you?

done

• Tracklisting: Can you include the total length of the album somewhere there? I think there is a provision for it in the {{tracklist}} template.

Since the album is broken into many sections I couldn't use the regular tracklist =/. Instead I have listed the total length for each chapter and listed the albums full length in the tracklist section.

• In the charts, the word Billboard should be mentioned only for Billboard 200 and Billboard Hot 100 as that is exactly their chart name. Remove the word Billboard from the R&B anbd Rap charts. Their wikilink is enough.

done

• Some of the online sources are coming as italicized in the references like Ultratop, MTV etc. Give a thorough run-down throughout the article.

done

• You can add Category:Albums certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of America.

done Crystal Clear x3 21:14, 2 June 2011 (UTC)

On hold for seven days. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 12:37, 2 June 2011 (UTC)

Seems fine. I'm placing this as GA. Congrats on your 30th(?) GA and my 50th review. Wine please... — Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:33, 3 June 2011 (UTC)