Talk:Mary Ann Hitchens/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:02, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Added cats
• "Mary Ann Hitchens (born 1944 or 1945)" Remove the ref from the lead. Her birth year should be cited in the body.
  • Moved to body.
• Link basketball in lead I guess.
  • Linked.
• Link softball in body.
  • Linked.
• "Hitchens began serving as a teacher, the women's basketball and field hockey coach at Springer Junior High School in 1967" I had to read this sentence twice. Change to "In 1967, Hitchens began serving as a teacher as well as the women's basketball and field hockey coach at Springer Junior High School"
  • Changed.
• "was named the ECC of the year" Is that supposed to say coach of the year or something?
  • Oops – fixed.
• Maybe add a little bit to the lead.
  • Expanded – does that look alright?
• Two of the infobox highlight links are misleading. There are not articles for the Delaware Fightin' Blue Hens HOF or the ECAC HOF.
  • Delinked UD HoF – delinked 'hall of fame' from the ECAC although I kept ECAC linked.
• Change infobox highlight to "University of Delaware Athletics Hall of Fame" since that's what the body calls it.
  • Changed.

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:44, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:38, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

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