Talk:Masterpiece (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

• from fellow singer Elton John. → between herself and Elton John
• while just entering the record charts in → while reaching the lower regions of the charts in
• When Madonna was busy filming her directorial venture → While Madonna was directing her film
• and finally came up → and came up
• In the song, → Remove, you can't be in a song.
• Link music critics
• Songs don't get sent to radio in the UK like they do in the US, so this is not a UK single.
• The audio file and two pictures are all on the right. They should be balanced out and have at least one on the left.
• Nothing in this article says it is a promotional single, as the info box suggest. Promotional singles are free and usually don't chart. Unless the singer has explicitly said "X is a promotional single", as Alexandra Burke did about "The Silence".
• FN5: Missing publisher
• There shouldn't be any quotes within quotes. FN11 for example should use '...' and not "..." in the title where it says Masterpiece.
• FN12: Missing publisher
• FN18: PopCrush needs linking
• FN20: Needs a publisher
• FN21: Daily Mail and Associated Newspapers need linking
• FN30: No block capitals in titles
• FN34: Time Inc. is already linked in FN15

Status

On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 16:30, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

Addressd all. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 16:59, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

Passing. Well done.  — AARON • ^TALK 22:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

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