Copyedit

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I did some copyediting, but overall it's pretty good. You might consider adding an infobox to this article: {{Infobox actor}}. --Haemo 21:56, 2 August 2007 (UTC)Reply

Oh, and this isn't a stub article, just so you know ;) --Haemo 21:57, 2 August 2007 (UTC)Reply

Request for Improvement

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I see your request at Requests for feedback I will attempt to do so...

In the lead paragraph summarize all the sections as well as define / introduce the subject by covering these areas...Some you already have covered in your lead...but I added all that the listed concepts for WPLead.

  • 1. Context - describing the category or field in which the idea belongs. State facts which may be obvious to you, but are not necessarily obvious to the reader.
  • 2. Characterization description.- Parents names, parents notability, siblings names and ages, siblings notability, pets, appearance, age, gender, educational level, vocation or occupation, financial status, marital status, social status, cultural background, hobbies, sexual orientation, religious beliefs, ambitions, motivations, personality, what the term refers to as used in the given context.
  • 3. Explanation - deeper meaning and background...bring in to the article reciprocal wiki links to articles which mention Megan Zheng on what links here if appropriate.
  • 4. Compare and contrast - how it relates to other topics, other film actors/actresses, films, youth acting, if appropriate...
  • 5. Criticism - include criticism if there has been significant

There is an example biography outline at Template:Biography as well as Tips for writing biographies on Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography and Manual of Style

  • ..The following is from What is a good article?
  • Criteria 1 .... It is well written as per grammar (quality of writing)...no spelling errors present.
  • Criteria 2 .... It is factually accurate and verifiable... You have cited many sources and references for your paragraphs. A basic infobox is here Template:Infobox Biography but more specific ones are here Category:People infobox templates...you may want to choose this one...Template:Infobox actor
  • Criteria 3 .... It is broad in its coverage and covers major aspects of topic. Reduce red links to keep rising in status. Bring in to the article reciprocal wiki links to articles which mention Megan Zheng on what links here if appropriate. It has categories, appropriate sections to her life, see also internal links, and external links.
  • Criteria 4 .... It is neutral... looks good as well. This is NPOV.
  • Criteria 5 .... It is stable no edit wars... looks good as well, facts are standing without dispute.
  • Criteria 6 .... It contains images...Looks good images are present.

Next would be to analyze and compare your article to...Featured article criteria

Also check out... Guide to writing better articles

Something which may help is to read this as well...This is how biographies progress from stub to feature status in the eyes of the reader/researcher/user...WikiProject Biography/Assessment

I have never given a comment about improving an article before...I hope this is helpful.....Good luck with your quest to improve it. If you disagree with this review, and think the article was incorrectly reviewed then you can ask for remediation at WikiProject Biography/Peer review If you have any other questions or comments, drop me a line at my talk page. Good luck, and happy editing!SriMesh | talk 04:54, 6 August 2007 (UTC)Reply

Problem about section named "Authors"

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So this child actress who is now 22 wrote over 40 erotic stories and the reference given is a broken link? I cannot find any evidence of this searching her Chinese and English names or the book names. An example is searching for "Youth Never Returns (既然青春留不住)" which returns results that it is based off a story "当菠菜遇上空心菜" by 顾小沙(顾伟) from the page http://baike.baidu.com/item/%E5%BD%93%E8%8F%A0%E8%8F%9C%E9%81%87%E4%B8%8A%E7%A9%BA%E5%BF%83%E8%8F%9C — Preceding unsigned comment added by 121.209.65.88 (talk) 15:55, 8 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

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RfC on content in Notes column of filmography tables in Singapore artistes BLPs

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There is a current RFC on certain content in Singapore artistes BLP articles that editors watching/editing/passing through this article may be interested in weighing in: Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Content in Notes column of filmography tables in Singapore artistes BLPs. This article may be affected due to the inclusion of Category:Singaporean actors‎ and/or one of its subcategories in the article. RobertskySemi (talk) 23:57, 30 July 2020 (UTC)Reply