Talk:Meshes of the Afternoon

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Who wrote it??

Under "background and production" it says Deren and Hackenschmied wrote it, yet on the right menu it only lists Deren's name for having written it. So did they actually both write it or not? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moon822 (talk • contribs) 08:45, 4 January 2018 (UTC)

Original research tag

I added an original research tag to the analysis section because a lot of the discussion of the themes is written in a way that feels more like a school essay than an encyclopedia in style and quality. Acire93 (talk) 21:52, 2 December 2022 (UTC)

Sure, the opinion of Lewis Jacob's is a bit confusing, saying about postwar etc while discussing a 1943 film. It also criticises the film for not following Hollywood ways of combining objective and subjective camera, which is irrelevant because Maya is an experimental filmmaker inventing her own language instead of following ready-made patterns. I would vote for deleting that section. Ilya Utekhin (talk) 05:19, 22 March 2023 (UTC)