Talk:Mike Kullman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

added philly and coach cat
"After being released" i dont think high schoolers get "released"
"third release" i wonder if theres another word we could use
- Changed both to "cut"; sounds better to me; though I could try changing it to something else if you'd like.
"first-team All-Pennsylvania State Athletic Conference." "second-team selection the following year" Add to infobox
- Added.
should we link minicamp
- Linked.
I think we can link retainer to Retainer agreement?
- Linked.
"the game, and Kullman" remove comma
- Removed.
"and made nine tackles" remove made
- Removed.
hes not actually german is he? Was he just born there? There is a german cat
- Not really sure - there wasn't really much talking about that - what would you suggest?

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:31, 30 October 2023 (UTC) @BeanieFan11: Where'd you get his height of 6'2 from? NFL, PFR and PFA all say 6'1. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:58, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply