Talk:Mirror (Porter Robinson song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: TechnoSquirrel69 (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 19:55, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Looking forward to that good topic! (I'll improve at least one of the singles to GA, I swear...) Skyshiftertalk 19:55, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Why am I not surprised? ;) Looking forward to your comments! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 20:08, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Copyvio percentage is slighly high, but this is due to a correctly attributed quote box. This is actually fine.
• I did a small fix on DeVille's name.
• I've improved the fair use rationale.
• The infobox describes the genre as electro-pop, add this to the Background and composition section

   Done —TS

• "Critical acclaim" seems too strong without a source; I think you can say it received "positive reception" though. (Applies to the lead and "Critical reception"

   Done —TS

• "Mirror" released on -> "Mirror" was released on

  Both are technically correct, but your suggestion rolls off the tongue a little better.  Done —TS

• Dance Music Northwest is not a strong source; is a replacement possible?

   Comment: I recognize it's not the most high-quality of sources, and I've used it as minimally as possible — only to verify the statement that the sample was lifted from The School of Life's video. I don't believe any other source mentions this. —TS

• Some references are marked as dead but they aren't. It's the case with the refs 2, 9, 15

  Ah, a leftover from back in the day when I didn't know how to use the |url-status= parameter!  Fixed —TS

• Link The Line of Best Fit for ref. 13

   Done —TS

Spot-check

All references are properly formatted. I'll check the odd-numbered ones (from [1]).

• 1 Y
• 3 Y
• 5 It doesn't exactly confirm "during which he released very little music". (might need to be fixed in other articles...)

  Added a source to verify that. Also added to the Nurture and "Unfold" articles. —TS

• 7 Y
• 9 Y
• 11 Y
• 13 Y However, I think you should add along with "Do-re-mi-fa-so-la-ti-do" or similar.

   Not done. This might fit better in the article about the album, but doesn't add much here, in my opinion. —TS

• 15 Y However, it would be cool to specify that the avatar is a drawing of Robinson.

  It actually did before my rewrite this weekend, but I accidentally took that detail out.  Done —TS

 On hold Skyshiftertalk 22:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

@Skyshifter: All comments addressed! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 01:06, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

Oh, I forgot to mention that I added a sample of the song. You'll want to do a criterion 6a check on that. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 01:09, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

The fair use rationale is valid. I am happy to ✓ Pass this article now! Skyshiftertalk 01:14, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

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