Talk:Mohabbatein/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox, Lead

• The reference for the budget (infobox) has the wrong title.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• This says the budget was ₹190 million, so recite it and change the budget everywhere to ₹120–190 million

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "second-highest grossing" → "second-highest-grossing"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Add commas after Shah Rukh Khan, Jimmy Shergill, and "Academy Awards".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Plot, Cast

• In the last paragraph, add commas after "Sameer, Vicky" and "Sanjana, Ishika".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Other than that, the plot passes WP:FILMPLOT and the cast looks good.

Production

• "highest grossing" → "highest-grossing"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "change his mind" → "changed his mind"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "made another" → "make another"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "a honest" → "an honest"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "role as Megha" → "role of Megha"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "tree male" → "three male"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• "specially" → "specifically"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Wikilink Screen.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Recite references at the end of each quote.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Change uses of "..." (here and in other sections) to "[...]"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Music

• Add a comma after Shah Rukh Khan.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Other than that, this section looks good.

Release, Critical reception

• No issues here.

Accolades

• Table looks good.

References, External links

• Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subcription".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

• Add "/reviews" to the Rotten Tomatoes link per Template talk:Rotten Tomatoes.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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